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clarification to my post a few minutes ago - meant
to focus on the 2nd para of section 8.2:
Grenville Armitage wrote:
[..]
> If section 8.2 simply pointed back to
^ "2nd para of.."
> the earlier discussion of AFxy<-->CLP mappings the text would be
> more self contained (and readers would be less likely to wonder
> if 8.2 is actually providing some further insight or normative
^ "2nd para of.."
> requirement over and above 4.2.2 and 4.4.2, which it does not).
>
> That's a minor confusion easily avoided, either by removing 8.2
"2nd para of.." ^
> or at least writing the text like "Only two possible drop precedence
> may be indicated by the CLP bit. Sections 4.2.2 and 4.4.2 define
> how three AFxy precedence levels [DIFF_AF] are mapped to these
> two values."
cheers,
gja
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