The IP Over NBMA (ION) Archive[Date Prev][Date Next][Thread Prev][Thread Next] [Date Index][Thread Index][Author Index][Subject Index] draft-ion-ipatm-classic2-02.txt WG last call (fwd)
Minor (mostly editorial) changes: - Global change "ITU-TS" to "ITU-T" - "Recommendation" is capitalized - change "ATM Forum UNI 4.0 specification [19]." to "ATM Forum Signalling 4.0 specification [19]". - change "SVC call management signalling is performed via implementations of the UNI 3.1 protocol [7,9]." to "SVC connection control signalling is performed by the UNI 3.1 or Signalling 4.0 protocol." - change "...the VC path via UNI 3.1 as part of call setup establishment" to "...the VC path via UNI 3.1 or Signalling 4.0 as part of connection establishment" - Would it be a problem to change "This memo recognizes that end-to-end signaling within ATM may allow negotiation of encapsulation method on a per-VC basis." to "For SVCs, non-default encapsulations may also be negotiated using the UNI 3.1 or Signalling 4.0 protocol."? - change "the ATM Forum's User-to-Network-Interface (UNI) signalling permits the MTU" to "the UNI 3.1 signalling protocol and Signalling 4.0 protocol permit the MTU" - Title of reference [19] is "ATM User-Network Interface (UNI) Signalling Specification Version 4.0"
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